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FINAL PROJECT SP22


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berberbirdy
berberbirdy
2022年5月10日

I like the concept of your statement! And I like the decision of b&w photography, and your models did a great job. However, I think you could've take a step further and find a location that has interesting background, instead of putting your subjects again a white wall. I think it'd look even better if you took these in from of a flower bush or just have flower around their faces.

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Gabrielle Sparro
Gabrielle Sparro
2022年5月08日

This is such a simple and straightforward idea, and most people drop the ball and make it boring. You, however, played very well into the simplicity. Having each of your models dressed exactly the same so that you can show off their natural beauty was perfect. The added detail of having it be black and white was golden I like that you did the side profiles too because I know a lot of people hate their side profiles. I love that you did not edit out loose hairs or anything. You did a great job.

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Lottie Shepherd
Lottie Shepherd
2022年5月07日

I absolutely love the theme of beauty in its natural form. In our society it is almost impossble to feel completely confidents because we are constantly comparing ourselves to retouched photos of other women, who live lives completely different from our own. I think this series of photos captures the sense that we can feel beautiful makeup, or perfect lighting, and retouching. From a technical standpoint the framing and focusing of each photo was great! My only suggestion would be to use some more creative angles and posing :)

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oliveriol
2022年5月06日

I love the message behind your photos! As a female, we tend to nitpick our appearance and bully our body because we don't look like someone else or what society tell us to look like. We also rarely tend to appreciate our natural beauty that so many admire. I think you did an excellent job capturing the natural beauty of these women!

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bankd
2022年5月06日

I really like your artist statement and I understand what you're saying through your pictures. I also like how they all are wearing the same white shirt it goes really well with the monochrome style.

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